Just to let you all know, I have begun work on the story. Let me explain a few things. For one, The protags name is not Vega, his name is Tracyn Kaine, his codename is Vega. He was exiled for striking down another student. This is odd because he would not do that, something inside him made him want to, hint at the Darkness Rising title, and his lover, Aya, is a jedi. She tries to bring him back but he says he cant and he wont. Kano is Tracyns partner and a merc. Rehtae is Tracyns old jedi master who tries to save him but will be forced into confrontation. There are more characters, but these are really the ones who matter.